Tuesday, November 11, 2014
IRB Intro -- "127 Hours" by Aron Ralston
The IRB I have chosen to read for this marking period is "127 Hours" by Aron Ralston. The book focuses on Ralston's experience being trapped in Blue John Canyon in Utah over a 127 hour period, which is where the book gets its name from. Both the book and the movie based on the book have received multiple awards.
Tuesday, November 4, 2014
TOW #8 -- "Night" be Elie Wiesel (IRB Post #2)
At Birkenau -- first thought to be Aushwitz by Elie -- the first of many “selections” occurs. During these selections, those thought to be weak or unfit for physical work were separated from the others and killed. Elie and his father remain together after being separated from his mother and younger sister, both of whom he never sees again. Upon reaching the Nazi guards, Elie and his father lie about their ages to make themselves seemingly more able to complete physical labor. It is after this process, however, that Elie's fear peaks. While waiting in line to enter the camp, Elie watches as the Nazis throw babies and toddlers -- still alive and screaming -- into fires lining the path. In this moment, Elie's mindset switches from confusion to fearing for his life. He tells his father that what they see is impossible, that “humanity would never tolerate” such an atrocity. His father goes on to explain that humanity is non-existent while the other prisoners around them begin to recite the Jewish prayer for the dead, "the Kaddish." Elie joins the other prisoners in prayer, but he has trouble understanding what he has to thank God for. At one point, when the prisoners are told to go either left or right, it is not made clear which path lead to the barracks and which path lead to the crematorium. This uncertainty keeps the reader's attention while also holding their feelings captive until they figure out if Elie and his father are sent to the barracks or not, though since Elie is the one writing book and there are more chapters, it can be assumed Elie, at least, lives.
At the end of the summer of 1944, after many months of hard labor, the Jewish High Holidays arrive but Elie does not find a reason to bless God and rather mocks the idea that the Jews are God’s chosen people. The celebration of the Jewish New Year is short-lived as another selection is announced. Elie passes the first round, and his father passes the second. Elie knows more work is to come for both of them, but is happy not to be by himself. Winter soon arrives and the prisoners begin to suffer in the cold. Eliezer’s foot swells up, and he undergoes an operation. However, rumors of the approaching Russian army gives Elie new hope. This hope does not last long as the Germans decide to evacuate the camp before the Russians can arrive. The prisoners arrive at the Gleiwitz camp a few days later, met with a third selection before the prisoners are taken to a field where a train of cattle cars picks them up. The journey to Buchenwald takes even more lives.
Elie mentions only two more events after this, the death of his father on January 29, 1945 and the arrival of the American army on Aprill 11th, 1945, following days of Nazis slaughtering the prisoners. Elie, after having fully recovered, looked into a mirror -- something which he had not seen since Sighet -- and peered back at himself, recounting: “From the depths of the mirror, a corpse gazed back at me.”
Uncertainty of Elie's future throughout the book captures the reader's interest and captivates their feelings. Foreshadowing is used throughout the book as a device to always keep the reader guessing whether or not Elie will be alive on the next page. It is through this device that Elie explains his own feelings he experienced while he was in the concentration camps.
At the end of the summer of 1944, after many months of hard labor, the Jewish High Holidays arrive but Elie does not find a reason to bless God and rather mocks the idea that the Jews are God’s chosen people. The celebration of the Jewish New Year is short-lived as another selection is announced. Elie passes the first round, and his father passes the second. Elie knows more work is to come for both of them, but is happy not to be by himself. Winter soon arrives and the prisoners begin to suffer in the cold. Eliezer’s foot swells up, and he undergoes an operation. However, rumors of the approaching Russian army gives Elie new hope. This hope does not last long as the Germans decide to evacuate the camp before the Russians can arrive. The prisoners arrive at the Gleiwitz camp a few days later, met with a third selection before the prisoners are taken to a field where a train of cattle cars picks them up. The journey to Buchenwald takes even more lives.
Elie mentions only two more events after this, the death of his father on January 29, 1945 and the arrival of the American army on Aprill 11th, 1945, following days of Nazis slaughtering the prisoners. Elie, after having fully recovered, looked into a mirror -- something which he had not seen since Sighet -- and peered back at himself, recounting: “From the depths of the mirror, a corpse gazed back at me.”
Uncertainty of Elie's future throughout the book captures the reader's interest and captivates their feelings. Foreshadowing is used throughout the book as a device to always keep the reader guessing whether or not Elie will be alive on the next page. It is through this device that Elie explains his own feelings he experienced while he was in the concentration camps.
Sunday, October 19, 2014
TOW #7 -- "I am Not a Coffee Drinker" by Ethan Hauser
"I am Not a Coffee Drinker" is a short essay written by Ethan Hauser in honor of National Coffee Day, recently held 3 weeks ago. However, the essay itself proceeds to highlight the importance of the symbolism of coffee in modern society, rather than the individual importance of the actual drink. Hauser talks about his knowledge of Starbucks and little coffee shops with baristas and free WiFi. He also talks about his knowledge of coffee's presence in social media, through Instagram and Facebook posts. Yet, he admits his lack of knowledge pertaining to what an espresso is, or an Americano, but only of a latte. Through mentioning this, Hauser divulges the fact that he has little knowledge about the drink itself, but only of what is portrayed in modern society that pertains to it.
Hauser goes about highlighting the significance of coffee in modern society through amusing anecdotes and repetition. He talks of his shortcomings with his understanding off basic coffee knowledge, such as the machines used to make the drink.
http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/19/opinion/sunday/i-am-not-a-coffee-drinker.html?_r=0
Hauser goes about highlighting the significance of coffee in modern society through amusing anecdotes and repetition. He talks of his shortcomings with his understanding off basic coffee knowledge, such as the machines used to make the drink.
"I don’t know what Keurig is. Could that be my Ikea couch? When I assembled it from the pictogram that came with it, I had several screws left over. Probably someday it will collapse. (Don’t go to Ikea on a Sunday unless you need to feel relieved about being single and childless.)
Through this he establishes the drink's little importance to himself, as he completely ignores it in these sentences from an essay which is supposed to be all about it. He also draws humor from the audience with these lines, which in turn keeps their attention. Hauser also uses repetition to draw the audience's attention as well.
"I DON’T know what an Americano is. I don’t know what Chemex is, though I thought the point was to get chemicals out of our foods, not into. Maybe that is what the “ex” is for. I don’t know what cold drip is. (I do know what iced coffee is. Iced tea, too — Mayor Bloomberg tried to ban it and that’s what got him voted out of office, right?)"
Through this repetition he gets his point across that he has little knowledge of actual drinks and their specifics. Yet, he reveals his knowledge of iced coffee and iced tea, as he has come to know these drinks through the actions of Mayor Bloomberg which brought the drinks publicity. This furthers Hauser's message telling the audience he knows only of coffee as he has seen it in the media.
It is clear that the use of rhetoric devices is varied throughout the short essay. The author employs multiple devices in order to get his message across to the reader, including anecdotes and repetition. The anecdotes kept the attention, while the repetition hammered the message into the reader's mind over and over again. This allowed Hauser to explain his perspective that we know little about coffee, only what we see in media. Yet, coffee is a staple in our society through its presence in social media and that is the reason why we celebrate it. http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/19/opinion/sunday/i-am-not-a-coffee-drinker.html?_r=0
Sunday, October 12, 2014
TOW #6 -- "Advanced screenings for Ebola begin at JFK airport" by Fox News
The U.S. is doing everything in its power to prevent the spread of Ebola -- a deadly viral hemorrhagic fever which had killed 4,00 people in West Africa over the past few months -- from entering the country. Additional screenings will begin for airline passengers travelling from West Africa to New York's JFK Airport this week, as well as airline passengers travelling to Newark’s Liberty, Washington’s Dulles, Chicago’s O'Hare, and Atlanta’s Hartsfield-Jackson airports next week. Public health workers at the five airports will use no-touch thermometers to take the temperatures of travelers from the three countries which have been most affected by the virus -- Liberia, Sierra Leone and Guinea. In addition, those found to have fevers will be quarantined and interviewed to determine whether or not they may have come in contact with someone infected with the Ebola virus. Of the 150 people that travel daily to the U.S. from or through the three countries affected most, nearly 95 percent of them land at one of the five airports at which screenings are being increased.
This information was presented to the American public by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (C.D.C) and the Department of Homeland Security's Customs and Border Protection Wednesday, October 8th. Citing sources such as President Obama and backing up their actions with the 1944 Public Health Service Act which allows the federal government to take action to prevent communicable diseases -- including viral hemorrhagic fevers such as Ebola -- from spreading into the country, the ethos of the announcement is clearly established. Both pathos and logos are established as well through the mentioning of the death toll caused by the Ebola virus, as it causes emotion in the listener or reader to want to put a stop to the virus, as well as a logical argument in which it seems that the increased screenings are necessary in order to keep the country safe.
The reporting agency relaying the information to the American Public, Fox News, uses an allegory to convince the reader of the necessity of the increased screenings as well as statistics backing the actions of the government, showing clear support of the Ebola screenings. The allegory used in the article is in support of the opposing view that the additional screenings are useless, as it mentions that additional screenings implemented with the three countries hit hardest by the disease has seen nothing but failure. This helps to build credibility as it shows full knowledge on the situation and is, therefore, more convincing to the reader.
http://www.foxnews.com/politics/2014/10/12/advanced-us-airport-screening-for-ebola-begins-saturday-at-new-york-kennedy/
This information was presented to the American public by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (C.D.C) and the Department of Homeland Security's Customs and Border Protection Wednesday, October 8th. Citing sources such as President Obama and backing up their actions with the 1944 Public Health Service Act which allows the federal government to take action to prevent communicable diseases -- including viral hemorrhagic fevers such as Ebola -- from spreading into the country, the ethos of the announcement is clearly established. Both pathos and logos are established as well through the mentioning of the death toll caused by the Ebola virus, as it causes emotion in the listener or reader to want to put a stop to the virus, as well as a logical argument in which it seems that the increased screenings are necessary in order to keep the country safe.
The reporting agency relaying the information to the American Public, Fox News, uses an allegory to convince the reader of the necessity of the increased screenings as well as statistics backing the actions of the government, showing clear support of the Ebola screenings. The allegory used in the article is in support of the opposing view that the additional screenings are useless, as it mentions that additional screenings implemented with the three countries hit hardest by the disease has seen nothing but failure. This helps to build credibility as it shows full knowledge on the situation and is, therefore, more convincing to the reader.
http://www.foxnews.com/politics/2014/10/12/advanced-us-airport-screening-for-ebola-begins-saturday-at-new-york-kennedy/
Sunday, October 5, 2014
TOW #5 -- Political Cartoon
Over the past several months, the Russian Federation has been encroaching on its shared borders with Ukraine -- even crossing the border on multiple occasions. At the surface of the situation, Russian army troops were being sent into Ukraine to help minimalize the violence within the country as it experienced a shift in power. However, it is believed that the Russian troops were sent into Ukraine to take control of the country, rather than to simply act as peacekeepers. This allegation has led many other countries in the world -- including the United States -- to take a closer look at the situation as it has unraveled. Some countries, convinced of Russia's ulterior motives, have even begun to place sanctions on Russia, limiting their trading with the country among other punishments. The United States is one of the countries to have placed sanctions on Russia. However, it is highly disputed whether or not the country is enforcing the sanctions in place, or just letting them lapse over time.
The political cartoon below details one side of the argument as to whether or not the United States is enforcing its sanctions on Russia. The bear pictured in the cartoon represents Russia, with the bees representing the sanctions and Obama representing the bee hive. The bear is shown saying "BEES WITH NO STINGERS!..COOL!" This is referring to the lapsing sanctions put in place by the United States which do no real harm to Russia, as they are "all bark and no bite." Simply put, the sanctions carry no real threat to the country, as they are more of a political move than one to seriously put an end to Russian military activity along the borders of Ukraine.
The purpose of this political cartoon was to shine a light on the complicated politics which have engulfed the situation, as well as to depict the idea of the sanctions carrying little action. This is achieved through a comical metaphor in which the author likened the sanctions to bees with no stingers. The metaphor was able to break-down the situation into a simple idea which was relayed to the audience -- primarily the Americans looking upon the sanctions -- with delicate humor.
The political cartoon below details one side of the argument as to whether or not the United States is enforcing its sanctions on Russia. The bear pictured in the cartoon represents Russia, with the bees representing the sanctions and Obama representing the bee hive. The bear is shown saying "BEES WITH NO STINGERS!..COOL!" This is referring to the lapsing sanctions put in place by the United States which do no real harm to Russia, as they are "all bark and no bite." Simply put, the sanctions carry no real threat to the country, as they are more of a political move than one to seriously put an end to Russian military activity along the borders of Ukraine.
The purpose of this political cartoon was to shine a light on the complicated politics which have engulfed the situation, as well as to depict the idea of the sanctions carrying little action. This is achieved through a comical metaphor in which the author likened the sanctions to bees with no stingers. The metaphor was able to break-down the situation into a simple idea which was relayed to the audience -- primarily the Americans looking upon the sanctions -- with delicate humor.
Sunday, September 28, 2014
TOW #4 -- "Night" by Elie Wiesel (IRB Post #1)
In the spring of 1944, the Jews of Sighet -- a town located in what is now modern day Romania -- gathered around their radios listening to reports of Jews across Europe becoming victims of violent attacks. Elie recounted their reluctance to believe that one man, Adolf Hitler, could wipe out an entire race, saying "The Germans were already in town, the Fascists were already in power, the verdict was already out – and the Jews of Sighet were still smiling."
In a matter of weeks, they too found themselves in that very situation when the Nazis stumbled upon their town. Yet, not once did their optimism waiver up until the point when innocent civilians began to be shot down in the streets. It was in the wake of Passover that the violence first struck. It started with a command to shoot any Jews who left their homes within the first three days following the holiday. Then the command was to shoot any Jews who refused to give up their valuable belongings. This progressed to the relocation of the Jews into two ghettos -- and then eventually to the deportation of the Jews to concentration camps in Germany.
At the time of Sighet's downfall, Elie was only 12 years old. He looked upon the town nervously as his father and the accompanying council members made the decision to not evacuate the area. He again looked upon the town nervously as the German soldiers marched through the streets, each choosing a house to occupy. Elie's fate was out of his hands, making him a mere bystander to the events unfolding around him. Within a few weeks, The Wiesels were transported to a ghetto where they would live for another few weeks until being transported to a smaller ghetto where they would await their deportation. They would then be forced into cattle cars -- some holding over 80 Jews at once -- and shipped off to Auschwitz, a Jewish concentration camp operated by the Nazis. There, Elie and his father would be split from his mother and sister and sent to work. Looming over were smokestacks working day and night releasing the smoke from the burning bodies in the furnace below. It is then that Elie begins to doubt his further existence, feeling abandoned by God as his death is looming near.
The reader can sense this in Elie as he Wiesel tells stories of himself looking for ways to kill himself rather than to be killed as a prisoner of the Nazis. He talks of one point when he thought about running into an electric fence to avoid being burned to death. This thought came shortly after he witnessed children being burned alive along the side of the trail he was walking on. Through images such as these which are imprinted in the minds of the readers, Wiesel is truly able to get the reader to sympathize with him as he writes.
In a matter of weeks, they too found themselves in that very situation when the Nazis stumbled upon their town. Yet, not once did their optimism waiver up until the point when innocent civilians began to be shot down in the streets. It was in the wake of Passover that the violence first struck. It started with a command to shoot any Jews who left their homes within the first three days following the holiday. Then the command was to shoot any Jews who refused to give up their valuable belongings. This progressed to the relocation of the Jews into two ghettos -- and then eventually to the deportation of the Jews to concentration camps in Germany.
At the time of Sighet's downfall, Elie was only 12 years old. He looked upon the town nervously as his father and the accompanying council members made the decision to not evacuate the area. He again looked upon the town nervously as the German soldiers marched through the streets, each choosing a house to occupy. Elie's fate was out of his hands, making him a mere bystander to the events unfolding around him. Within a few weeks, The Wiesels were transported to a ghetto where they would live for another few weeks until being transported to a smaller ghetto where they would await their deportation. They would then be forced into cattle cars -- some holding over 80 Jews at once -- and shipped off to Auschwitz, a Jewish concentration camp operated by the Nazis. There, Elie and his father would be split from his mother and sister and sent to work. Looming over were smokestacks working day and night releasing the smoke from the burning bodies in the furnace below. It is then that Elie begins to doubt his further existence, feeling abandoned by God as his death is looming near.
The reader can sense this in Elie as he Wiesel tells stories of himself looking for ways to kill himself rather than to be killed as a prisoner of the Nazis. He talks of one point when he thought about running into an electric fence to avoid being burned to death. This thought came shortly after he witnessed children being burned alive along the side of the trail he was walking on. Through images such as these which are imprinted in the minds of the readers, Wiesel is truly able to get the reader to sympathize with him as he writes.
Sunday, September 21, 2014
TOW #3 -- "The Ravioli Smile"
"The Ravioli Smile" was the slogan for an ad released by Chef Boy-ar-dee in 1971. The ad -- featured below -- depicts a young, smiling child ready to eat a spoonful of the company's product. This image is accompanied by a description below, saying that the beef ravioli is not just regular food, but fun food; food that is given as a treat or used as a celebration. It makes the reader think, "Hey, if the adorable kid in the ad likes the food, why shouldn't mine?" This is the exact reaction the company's marketers were hoping to achieve. The text written below the smiling child attacks three common marketing strategies: developing ethos, pathos, and logos. As for the smiling child itself, that is meant to draw emotion from the reader which makes them invested in the advertisement.
It is difficult to establish ethos when talking about foods. The mention of famous chefs lacks any appeal when associated with kids' food. After all, the parent consumers are not looking to buy a 5-star quality meal for their picky 5-year-old sitting in their cart. Parents, however, do associate with other parents. New parents in particular reap the tips and tricks left behind by those preceding them. Parents trust parents. This is what the marketers exploited. Written in small print below, is "Found in Mom's Basement." This insinuates that other parents trust Chef-boy-ar-dee with the diet of their children, so why should the reader? Mission accomplished.
Now onto the emotions. A smiling kid means a happy parent. So if ravioli makes a kid smile, than it makes the parents of the kid smile. It's a win-win for everyone. Mission accomplished -- again.
Finally, appealing to the logic. If ravioli means a smiling kid, and a smiling kid means a smiling parent, than a parent wanting to smile should buy the ravioli. Even better, the ravioli a nutritious food too, according to the ad. What else could a parent want? The ravioli is deal as well at 20 cents per serving. One word: sold.
Sunday, September 14, 2014
TOW #2 -- "Honduras's Desperate Voyagers" by Ioan Grillo
TIME Magazine recently published an article in their August 18th, 2014 issue concerning the recent spike in refugees from Honduras fleeing to the United States. In "Honduras's Desperate Voyages," Ioan Grillo explains that the social infrastructure in Honduras has collapsed under the pressure of a corrupt government and street gangs patrolling the cities. For the 170,000 people that live in Chemelecón, one of the most violent suburbs of San Pedro Sula, the police only have access to 4 patrol cars. Needless to say, those who are supposed to protect the security of the people are rendered helpless.
All across Honduras, violence is nearly inescapable. Following the introduction of Latin American drug cartels in the country after having been forced from their positions in Mexico and Columbia, crime rates rose exponentially. In 2012 alone, the country -- which is only home to 8.6 million people -- saw the deaths of 7,172 people -- the highest in the world outside of a declared war-zone.
To add onto the pressure, citizens are forced by the street gangs to pay a "war tax," which has greatly corrupted the country's economy. In addition, the country's youth join street gangs to avoid the extortion and in the hopes of finding more security than that provided by their government.
However, the many Honduran citizens have now begun to flee to the United States with the help of illegal organizations that run routes similar to trade routes through the Rio Grande into the United States. For $6,500 a piece, one is promised a safe journey to freedom and at their destination, it is said that Obama will be waiting for them with legal permits allowing them to enter the country. Though false in reality, those willing to pay the hefty fee truly believe that they have no other options left than to believe in the smugglers.
Honduran President Juan Orlando Hernández called upon the United States to help Honduras stop the flow of the Honduran youth to the United States by cracking down on those who have taken refuge in the country. It is his hope that with a system put in place similar to Plan Columbia, a campaign run in Columbia during the 1990's which effectively lowered crime rates, that Honduras will be able to return to a stable country.
Grillo relays all of this information with established logos -- including a wealth of statistics backing the claims of Honduras's corruption and how that has created the flow of Honduran citizens to the United States. It is through this tactic that Grillo is able to bring to light the serious problems that the immigration poses to both countries as well as what needs to be done to stop the immigration.
All across Honduras, violence is nearly inescapable. Following the introduction of Latin American drug cartels in the country after having been forced from their positions in Mexico and Columbia, crime rates rose exponentially. In 2012 alone, the country -- which is only home to 8.6 million people -- saw the deaths of 7,172 people -- the highest in the world outside of a declared war-zone.
To add onto the pressure, citizens are forced by the street gangs to pay a "war tax," which has greatly corrupted the country's economy. In addition, the country's youth join street gangs to avoid the extortion and in the hopes of finding more security than that provided by their government.
However, the many Honduran citizens have now begun to flee to the United States with the help of illegal organizations that run routes similar to trade routes through the Rio Grande into the United States. For $6,500 a piece, one is promised a safe journey to freedom and at their destination, it is said that Obama will be waiting for them with legal permits allowing them to enter the country. Though false in reality, those willing to pay the hefty fee truly believe that they have no other options left than to believe in the smugglers.
Honduran President Juan Orlando Hernández called upon the United States to help Honduras stop the flow of the Honduran youth to the United States by cracking down on those who have taken refuge in the country. It is his hope that with a system put in place similar to Plan Columbia, a campaign run in Columbia during the 1990's which effectively lowered crime rates, that Honduras will be able to return to a stable country.
Grillo relays all of this information with established logos -- including a wealth of statistics backing the claims of Honduras's corruption and how that has created the flow of Honduran citizens to the United States. It is through this tactic that Grillo is able to bring to light the serious problems that the immigration poses to both countries as well as what needs to be done to stop the immigration.
IRB Intro -- "Night" by Elie Wiesel
The IRB I have chosen for the first marking period is "Night," by Elie Wiesel, the 1986 winner of the Nobel Peace Prize. Night is an autobiographical account of the experiences undergone by Elie and his father within Auschwitz -- a Jewish concentration camp -- during the Jewish Holocaust. The text focuses on both Elie's battle for survival and his battle with God as he tries to understand the cruelty plaguing the world around him.
Sunday, September 7, 2014
TOW #1 -- "How To Say Nothing in 500 Words"
Professor Paul Roberts’ 1956 essay, “How to Say Nothing in
500 Words,” is a staple for the principles of good writing which should be
evident in every written piece. Having taught college English for over twenty
years, in both San Jose State College and later in Ivy League member Cornell
University, Roberts was well versed in linguistics. It is from this experience
that Roberts is able to guide the reader -- someone with the ambition to become a better writer -- to including elements needed to make a good written piece, an exquisite
written piece, as well as eliminating those that interfere with this goal.
Roberts first suggests to the reader practices such as; the inclusion of examples, rather than plain facts; and the practice of being concise, or removing extra words and ideas not needed in the paper. The inclusion of examples can help to further illustrate an idea, and helps to eliminate the dull atmosphere created by plain facts. The latter – which he refers to as padding a paper – is a technique often used by writers to reach the word limit in a written piece. Roberts points out that using this technique distracts the reader from the point of the paper, and should therefore never present within a paper.
Roberts also introduces the idea of using colored, colorful, and colorless words. He goes on to explain that colored words suggest the writer focuses on putting words in correct order, which can then be expressed with colorful words that tell a story. Colorless words, Roberts explains, are those which he believes to be road blocks in a paper as they provide little importance.
All of this comes wrapped in diction, or specific word choice, which keeps the piece focused on the task of making the reader a better writer. Specifically, the diction eliminates meaningless comments and highlights what is to be learned.
It is through successful writing techniques such as these that Roberts is able to teach the reader what he knows about writing a good essay. Using his own tips in his writing helps the reader to further conclude their importance as they experience firsthand the power of the techniques to create clarity.
Roberts first suggests to the reader practices such as; the inclusion of examples, rather than plain facts; and the practice of being concise, or removing extra words and ideas not needed in the paper. The inclusion of examples can help to further illustrate an idea, and helps to eliminate the dull atmosphere created by plain facts. The latter – which he refers to as padding a paper – is a technique often used by writers to reach the word limit in a written piece. Roberts points out that using this technique distracts the reader from the point of the paper, and should therefore never present within a paper.
Roberts also introduces the idea of using colored, colorful, and colorless words. He goes on to explain that colored words suggest the writer focuses on putting words in correct order, which can then be expressed with colorful words that tell a story. Colorless words, Roberts explains, are those which he believes to be road blocks in a paper as they provide little importance.
All of this comes wrapped in diction, or specific word choice, which keeps the piece focused on the task of making the reader a better writer. Specifically, the diction eliminates meaningless comments and highlights what is to be learned.
It is through successful writing techniques such as these that Roberts is able to teach the reader what he knows about writing a good essay. Using his own tips in his writing helps the reader to further conclude their importance as they experience firsthand the power of the techniques to create clarity.
Monday, September 1, 2014
When Writers Speak -- Arthur Krystal
Arthur
Krystal’s “When Writers Speak” focuses on the intellectual process that takes
place while writing, as opposed to that which occurs while speaking. Krystal
seeks to establish – within the reader – an understanding of how a brain may
work so as to divulge information seemingly only known to the writers who
experience the phenomenon first hand. Edgar Allan Poe once said, “Some
Frenchman – possibly Montaigne – says ‘People talk about thinking, but for my
part I never think except when I sit down to write.’” Krystal goes on to
explain writing as a catalyst for thought, likening the process to “…a petri
dish for its genesis.” Harvard psychologist Steven Pinker then pointed out that
thinking precedes writing, a process we are usually unable to tap into while in
conversation. This allows one to deliberately create a well-rounded sentence which
they may not conjure up if asked on the spot, due to time restraints. Pinker
does agree, however, that since the writing process enables opportunity for
revision, it may engage larger parts of the brain in the thinking process – in effect
– producing greater result. It is through the disclosure of this information
that Krystal reveals the difference in cognitive function when completing an
ordinary task as opposed to one thought out deeply. Simply put, talking is done
on the fly, while writing is carefully cultivated to vocalize one’s opinion or
feelings. Krystal compares this to mathematicians thinking differently while
working on a theorem than while counting change, or to a quarterback throwing a
pass during a game as opposed to having a catch in his backyard. This analogy helps
the reader – who is essentially anyone with thoughts – to distinguish between
the ways in which they divulge their ideas through words. In fact, Krystal’s effective
analogy and scientific reasoning help the reader to understand the difference
between any action done before and after it is thought out.
Speaking vs. Writing
Thought precedes writing while speaking is on the fly -- englishharmony.com |
Irreconcilable Dissonance -- Brian Doyle
Brian
Doyle, author of “Irreconcilable Dissonance,” experienced firsthand the perils
of growing up in a household with his disputing parents -- along with watching his
friends and coworkers experience the same struggles. Doyle points out that
anyone could fall victim to divorce at any time, which constitutes his audience
to anyone reading the essay. Doyle explains: "The instant there is no
chance of death is the moment of death." In the United States alone, 50%
of all marriages end in divorce. That means there is about 1 divorce every 13
seconds in the United States, which adds up to about 6,646 divorces per day and
around 46,523 divorces in a single week. What was once a rare occurrence has
now become the go-to outlet for married couples experiencing turmoil in their
relationship. Yet, what is even more dismal than the aforementioned statistics
is the reason behind they are what they are. While many divorces are caused by
a hindered relationship, there are divorces caused by small things such as
"one man who got divorced so he could watch all sixty episodes of The Wire
in chronological order" nonetheless. In many divorces, the couple simply
claims to be tired; tired of fighting, tired of being unhappy, tired of being
where they are. Doyle makes a point of this by saying, "...so if what
makes a marriage work (the constant shifting of expectations and eternal parade
of small surprises) is also what causes marriages to dissolve, where is it safe
to stand? Nowhere, of course." Merely anything can lead to divorce, so the
state of being "safe" is virtually nonexistent. It is through these
lessons – coupled with imagery of decade-long marriages ending due to the
smallest reason, such as a practical joke – that Doyle teaches the reader to
become aware of the possibility of divorce, so as to help the reader to accept
that living in fear of divorce only makes it easier for you to become victim to
it.
American Divorce Infographic
Divorce statistics in America -- dailyinfographic.com |
The Dead Book -- Jane Churchon
Franklin
D. Roosevelt once said, “If you treat people right, they will treat you right…ninety
percent of the time.” It is the belief in this idea that causes Jane Churchon,
a registered nurse for over the past 20+ years, to treat the process of pronouncing
someone dead as she does; with the respect and care she hopes will be afforded
to her when she passes away. Jane describes this process in her essay, “The
Dead Book,” which details the accounts of pronouncing a single person as
deceased. She starts out by saying, “I like to take my time when I pronounce someone
dead.” She goes on to explain that it is her desire to treat bodies with the
same respect that she would give to a living, breathing patient. This is
evident throughout a fictional representation of the process she goes through
when pronouncing Mrs. Jones deceased. Through imagery and allusions, such as “…I
use one of those disposable stethoscopes…made of flimsy red plastic the color
of cartoon blood, and I feel a little cheap…as if I have shown up to a dinner
party in a ribbed tube top,” she engages the reader in the process, implanting
feelings of remorse and respect in the reader – almost as if they personally
knew Mrs. Jones. Anyone who has had someone close to them pass away can relate
to these feelings. Yet, having the same feelings for someone who you didn’t know
rarely surface, except in Churchon’s case. Hovering over the body, she explains
her curiosity as to who the patient was and what their life was like before
they were ready to be pronounced deceased. Perhaps we don’t feel this way
because we don’t have a direct relation to the patient, whereas Churchon is the
person responsible for bringing an end to their life officially in legal terms.
But we do feel this way with Mrs. Jones, because Churchon has fostered in us a little
melancholy just by bringing to mind what the people who did know Mrs. Jones
personally are feeling. We weep not out of remorse, but out of respect.
Feeling For a Pulse That Isn't There
A nurse checking for a patient's pules -- Sylvia Nickerson |
The Bad Lion -- Toni Bentley
We
are all creatures of habit. It is in our blood to interfere with acts of nature
when we see fit. Yet, there are moments in time when interfering with acts of
nature compromise our moral identities. Nonetheless, there is an equal amount
of moments in time when leaving nature be goes against every fiber in our body.
Toni Bentley’s “The Bad Lion” proves to be an allegory for this human tendency.
The story, which follows a group of tourists essentially intruding on the
natural habitat of the African Lions – whom are residing within the Sabi Sands
Game Reserve – focuses on the human perspective of acts in nature for which we lack
understanding. While on a safari adventure, the tourists come face-to-face with
Satan, a rogue lion, whose aspirations for dominance deviate from the typical lion
behavior, leaving a trail of destruction in his wake as he works to impose his
dominance on the other lions inhabiting the game reserve. It is after watching
Satan attack a female lion firsthand that we begin to see the aforementioned
human tendency unravelling. Clueless as to why the lion has entered this state
of rampage, the tourists question their bystanding roles in the act and devise
ways of – in their minds – restoring order. This is what Toni Bentley intended on
revealing to the reader, the aspiration of the tourists to “make things right.”
Perhaps what we don’t realize is that, much like Satan, we feel the need for
dominance and control. Through selective imagery in which the reader – which could
be anyone who picked up the book – was exposed to a situation of out the
ordinary, Bentley was able to bring to light our longing for order and
structure both personally and in a general sense. Having received praise for
her work from The New York Times and Harvard University, among other publishers
and institutions, Bentley is well versed in the writing community. Her highly
acclaimed book, The Surrender, An Erotic
Memoir, seemingly set the stage for this essay as it was focused on the
struggle for dominance, much like Satan’s.
Lions on the Prowl
African Lions in the Sabi Sands Game Reserve -- thewildsource.com |
Fatheralong -- John Edgar Wideman
Emmett
Till was a 14-year-old African American Chicago boy murdered in Mississippi in
1955. Emmett’s body, pulled from the Tallahatchie River, was beaten and
disfigured to the point of being unidentifiable, only by the ring on his finger
belonging to his father, Louis Till. Louis had gone off to war in a segregated
army in 1942 – just months after Emmett was born – and only returned home once.
Having committed rape and murder, he was hanged by the United States Army on
July 2nd, 1955 in Italy, not long before his son was murdered. Much
like his son, Louis had grown up without the presence of a father. What seemingly
appears as a mere coincidence may in fact have a substantial connection,
according to John Edgar Wideman – a professor at Brown University and
widely-celebrated writer – in his essay, “Fatheralong.” Wideman proposes a
point that, “One could argue that the concept of race abiding today in America
is a profound orphaning of all black children.” Wideman goes on to further
explain that myths of race isolate children and place them at risk, due to the stereotype
defining the role of black fathers in their children’s’ lives. It is without
doubt that the existence of race in the United States continues to plague the
ailing attempts of true equality because we entertain a segregated vision of
our nation. When problems arise, fingers point towards it being a “white
problem” or a “black problem,” not a problem for the general population. It is because
of this that we are unable to truly live without – both openly and in the backs
of our minds – ideas of race. This constituting the idea that the death of
Emmett Till was due to the actions of his father, Louis, who did not “properly”
teach him about how white people treated black people in the South as opposed
to the North, something we have condemned him for as we expect him – as a black
father – to have done so. In truth, the death of both Emmett and his father are
our collective responsibility because we as a nation, fostered unjust
expectations of Louis – and his father as well. Through the imagery of Emmett
and Louis Till’s deaths, Wideman was able to address the readers, most of whom
are American citizens experiencing the race epidemic, and convince them of the
perils of the belief in race.
Emmett Tillman
Emmett Tillman, a 14-year-old boy murdered in 1955 -- biography.com |
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